Tight
The rhythms were pretty tight overall. I liked how you built the piece as different instruments entered one at a time. The only thing that detracted from it for me was I felt the bass instrument was overpowering. It would have been fine if it changed rhythm or pitch but it was sort of a dull pedal which drowned out the rest of the sounds. Still it was good and I loved the ending. I don't know what it was about it but I felt the ending was the perfect way to close out this
Good work